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Well here it is I said tuesbay and well I finished it in time. This was one of the most annoying pictures I have ever done lol but I am very pleased with the result.I hope you guy like it and wish me luck =D

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:icondestinyangel8350:
Overall I highly enjoyed this piece, I just happened to come by it while looking through the entries of the I Dream Contest. I really enjoy the background and the symmetry of the thrown you have going on there xD
Critique however, two things throw off this piece for me however tho. The photoshop leaf brush and font throw off the piece overall. A more subtle but bold lined font used along the bottom wouldn't take away from the rest of your illustration, and getting rid of the background leaf brush would allow a more bold and confident look coming from your overall manga-kinglyness. It definitely is a striking piece D:!
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:icongrumpy95:
That is awesome! XD

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:iconnaturalstudio:
Heh! Heh! Heh! Cool! ^ ^ It's finish! Are you sitting on manga?
:iconyfighter2:
Whoop! wow man good job

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:iconspinark:
Very awesome. Alas, it shouldn't say " I dream" but rather " I am"

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:icontatsu000:
You know what? You cease to amaze me. lol. :D Good Luck with the contest.

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:icondaegrima:
Looks like all that time spent on it was worth it =) Great job!

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いざ、倒れ逝くその時まで。
:iconnaruto1otaku:
Love it! xD

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:iconbluegobli60:
gl man xD looks epic hope u win ^^

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:iconbulletproofturtleman:
hahaha. Quite the cocky attitude huh? That sure is decked out and I can see why you would be cocky. XD

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:iconshinto896:
yep lol thx

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June 16
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